This is my very first time ever attempting to write a story of any kind. I would appreciate feedback.
Daniel knelt at the foot of the bed, the cold steel of his chastity device pressing into his skin; a constant, aching reminder of his submission. He was a slim, fair-skinned man in his late twenties, with sandy blond hair and soft blue eyes that shone with longing and vulnerability. The gold key to his cage hung from Evelyn’s necklace, resting between her breasts, a symbol of her absolute control.
Evelyn, radiant in her sheer black silk robe, welcomed Samuel and his five brothers. Each man was taller, broader, and more imposing than the last, their presence filling the room with anticipation and raw energy. Evelyn’s heart raced, her secret fantasy finally real, and Daniel’s arousal and humiliation fused as he realized he was about to witness everything he’d ever desired and feared.
Samuel approached first, cupping Evelyn’s face and kissing her deeply. Malik and Jabari knelt at her sides, worshipping her body with their mouths and hands, kissing her neck, sucking her nipples, and trailing their tongues down her stomach. Kofi and Amari spread her legs wide, their hands caressing her thighs and hips, while Zaire knelt behind her, his lips and tongue teasing the sensitive skin along her spine.
As Samuel entered her, Evelyn gasped, her body arching with pleasure. Malik and Jabari each took a breast in their mouths, worshipping her as Kofi pressed against her other entrance, seeking her consent with a murmured, “Can I?” She nodded, breathless, and soon felt the intense fullness of double penetration. Her body trembled, every nerve alight, as the brothers moved in rhythm, filling her completely.
Zaire guided Evelyn’s mouth to his cock, and she took him eagerly, moaning around him as the others continued to worship and claim her. Each brother praised her, their words a mix of reverence and filth, telling her how beautiful and insatiable she was, how perfectly she took them all.
Meanwhile, Daniel was not forgotten. Malik grinned at him, voice low and mocking: “Look at your wife, Daniel. This is what she needs, what you could never give her.” Jabari added, “Locked up and useless, just watching real men take care of her.” The brothers took turns taunting him, making him watch as Evelyn was overwhelmed with pleasure, her body adored and used by all of them.
Evelyn’s excitement built with every sensation and every word. Each time one of the brothers released inside her, she felt the hot rush of cum, the warmth spreading through her, triggering another wave of excitement and pleasure. She lost count of her orgasms, each one stronger than the last, her cries growing louder, her body trembling as she was filled again and again.
The brothers continued to worship her, their hands and mouths everywhere, one kissing her, another thrusting deep, another filling her mouth, another caressing her hair and whispering praise. The sensation of being adored and claimed by so many at once sent Evelyn over the edge, her body wracked with shuddering, rolling orgasms.
Daniel’s humiliation and arousal peaked as he watched, his body convulsing in the cage, a hands-free orgasm ripped from him by the sheer intensity of the scene and the brothers’ constant reminders of his place.
When the last brother finished, Evelyn lay trembling, utterly spent, her body glistening with sweat and the evidence of her pleasure. Samuel approached Daniel, holding the key to his chastity cage. “Since you can cum locked, you’ll stay this way,” he said, snapping the key in his fist.
Evelyn smiled, her eyes shining with satisfaction and love. “Mine forever,” she whispered, as Daniel nodded, overwhelmed and fulfilled by the ultimate realization of their shared, secret fantasy.